Thursday, November 17, 2005
this is a post for mel...
the greatest friend who edited my boring, sucky philosophy paper...
eventhough she was tired from her exam and wanted to sleep
thanks girl!
she's so cute, doing all the editing in red...
just like a teacher *whoops*
i love you girlie!!!
the cute note she left me..
Anyway apple, aside from a few grammatical errors, and by the way, you have bad expression, your essay is not bad la. I got what you were trying to say when I read it a second time. If you have time though, make your references clearer, i.e. instead of always typing a sentence like: The apple is red. This means… . Try not to use 'This' too much because it makes your argument a bit vague. Yup! That's it. =)
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